Re: what do you think of my design i did for a broshure?

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From: T. van der Heide
Date: Sat, 01 Nov 2008 23:34

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Although the poster asked it 2 months ago, I agree with the previous 
commenter's.

You used too much transparency, it would even look better if you got rid 
of the transparency on the two ladies in the back. The two firemen are 
full of shown pixels. Why the lines? It seems you want to get into the 
funky style. Why the two ladies, why firemen.

If you just started to use (I assume) Photoshop, it's a nice effort.
Keep on practicing.

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