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Criticism Wanted: Afterwards: The Problems with the World.

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From: duck
Date: Sat, 08 Aug 1992 03:23
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Criticism is wanted concerning the two parts of Afterwards: The problems with
the world especially concering plotting, character development, fore-shadowing
and overall story development.

Posts or emails would be appreciated. However, please take all the "it sucked"
to email... :-) 

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