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Article #45Re: Speaking in a vacuum
From: Ratboy
Date: Mon, 24 Aug 1992 01:22
Date: Mon, 24 Aug 1992 01:22
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>I once wrote a story of a terraformer machine returning to Earth after
>seeding a distant solar-system, only to find it empty with all mammals
>wiped out by a virus. The story was of its development from an automaton
>into a sentient being, and finally of its decision to correct a perceived
>wrongess; With a childlike persistency, it started to rebuild Earth, seek
>a way to make animals recreated from DNA-libraries immune, and ultimately
>to resurrect the race that had created it.
>
>Whereas some friends of mine claimed they liked the story, I found it too
>simple and straightforward, and put it back to the dim recesses of my
>hard disk to wait for extensive rewriting in order to concentrate on
>the developing personality with more detail. I liked the basic idea, but
>in its present form, it's in my opinion one of the worst pieces I've ever
>written. (Some consolation, hm? :))
>
Sounds fascinating. I would love to read it. Original. Gonna post it when done?
Ratboy the One-Who-Needs-To-Quit-Reading-Alt.Prose-and-Write-So-He-Can-Post-
Another-Story-Here
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