Re: Why I Love SF

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From: David Kaye
Date: Fri, 09 Nov 2001 23:06

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Jack Hamilton wrote the quoted material below:

" You're making a false distinction between "the Chronicle" and "some copy
" editor or publisher".  If the copy editor or publisher hadn't wanted
" that text to appear, it wouldn't have.

No, you are reading that into my post.  I simply rephrased the object
from "Chronicle" to "copy editor or publisher" to keep my paragraph
fresh.  

Unfortunately, such refreshment can be carried to extremes, such as when
rain is referred to in news stories in the second paragrph as "the wet
stuff" to avoid using "rain" again.

I'm aware that the publisher serves at the pleasure of Hearst
Corporation management.



-- 
(C) 2001                  You should never stand in love's way, especially
David Kaye                      if love is driving a bus.  -- R. M. Weiner

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From: David Kaye <dk@removethis.area.com>
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Subject: Re: Why I Love SF
Date: 9 Nov 2001 23:06:51 GMT
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