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Re: MOST Y2K FIXES WILL ONLY LAST A GENERATION

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From: john_beamish
Date: Wed, 24 Mar 1999 00:00
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In article <19990322.213618.26299@sol.sun.csd.unb.ca>,
  CIPS General Discussion List <CIPS-L@LISTSERV.UNB.CA> (Tamar Kuperstein)
wrote:
> Intersting to know that you are addressing only the gentlemen in the crowed.
> For a minute I thought that we are approaching the Twenty First Century!
>

Tamar

Since you want to nitpick, "Intersting" should be "Interesting"; "crowed"
should be "crowd"; "I thought" is past tense while "we are" is present tense;
"Twenty First" should be "twenty-first"; "Century" is unnecessarily
capitalized; the first sentence lacks a subject and a verb though the elision
of "It is" would be accepted in an informal conversation; and the second
sentence should have a comma after "minute".

Your sentences would have been grammatically correct if you had written
"It is interesting to know that you are addressing only the gentlemen in the
crowd.  For a minute, I thought we were approaching the twenty-first century."

Now that your mistakes have been highlighted, please take the time to pay
attention to Mike's content.

John Beamish
former CIPS member

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