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Tue, 10 Nov 2009 03:15
"Metatron's Gambit" - A Chronicles of the Children of Destiny short story
Author: daniel
Date: Tue, 10 Nov 2009 03:15
Date: Tue, 10 Nov 2009 03:15
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Chronicles of the Children of Destiny Metatron’s Gambit By Daniel Thomas Andrew Daly http://noahidebooks.angelfire.com © 2009 2,300 HY Life for Metatron, firstborn son of God, had its ups and its downs but, for the most part, he was generally satisfied with his lot in life. He lived in Home, the very first of the created Realms, of which there were now 3: Home, Heaven and the Realm of Infinity. From what God had shared with him he knew of a Realm to be created coming up in the future known as the Realm of Eternity. And after that, over the aeons, a significant number more from what God had said. But for now he resided in home happily living out his life. Metatron played Chess, often engaged with bouts with the theophany of God and his younger brother and sister, Logos and Memra. He liked Chess, in fact a great deal, and was currently engaged in a game with God. God had shared with him this truth – in his theophanic form he had limitations – particular limitations, which were suitable for such a form. And while Metatron, after over 1,000 games of chess with God had never beaten him, God had told him he was capable of doing as such. And so, currently sitting out in the fields surrounding home, gazing out at the neverending aurora which surrounded the realm, Metatron considered something. A gambit. A gamble. A risky move, something he had not really tried before, to try and finally claim victory over his eternal father. And it was a gambit which involved a new idea he had come up with: Sacrifice. The sacrifice gambit in Metatron’s thinking was this: instead of making the most obvious moves in strength, put forth a subtle move for a piece which he knew could be taken without risk to, in the hypothesis, make it easier in later moves to take a more powerful piece. This idea – sacrifice – seemed to him a new development in the game. Looking at his father as he played he often felt that God was still going easy on him. But God never really seemed to play with this type of move in mind, usually playing a similar, but slightly different, gameplan to himself. Perhaps this idea, perhaps this new idea, would work. Perhaps it would be the very thing which would give him his first victory over his eternal father. * * * * * Logos took the cookies out of the oven, an oven mitt on his hands handling the hot tray, as God and Memra, hearing the oven buzzer, came into the room. Metatron soon joined them. He carefully used the tongs to put the cookies onto a plate and put them in the middle of the table. God was about to grab one when Logos rebuked him saying, ‘wait for your milk.’ But God was hungry and snatched one anyway and started nibbling. Memra looked at God’s substantial belly and smiled. ‘Your starting to put on weight, father. You really should watch what you eat.’ ‘I guess,’ replied the theophany of God. Logos placed four glasses of milk and the jug on the table, and God prayed to his eternal spirit thanks, and they started munching. After eating his fourth cookie God looked at Metatron. ‘Have you considered your next move? You are getting better you know.’ Metatron looked at him cautiously and said, ‘Mmm. Perhaps father. You’ll see.’ God eyed him cautiously and went back to his cookie. ‘Well it had better be a good move son,’ he responded. ‘I think I almost have you again.’ ‘So you say,’ responded Metatron, being as cautious not to brag as possible. Logos and Memra looked at the two of them and Logos said, ‘He’ll beat you eventually, father. He does persevere.’ ‘Perhaps. But we’ll see.’ ‘Indeed we will,’ said Memra, and took another sip of milk. * * * * * 17 moves had passed, and the Gambit was about to show its fruit. God looked stuck and finally caved and moved the piece in the only way he could, Metatron instantly taking the exposed rook with his bishop. God looked at him and slowly a grin came to his face. ‘Well, son. I think you have finally done it.’ And Metatron beamed. 2 days later, Metatron having claimed victory, went to the chalkboard scoreboard out on the side of the house. God was still keeping score and on his half he still managed to fit in all his strokes of victory. God had followed him outside and Logos and Memra were just behind him. As Metatron picked up the chalk Logos started going ‘Da darr. Da darr. Da darr,’ and in triumph Metatron put his first chalk stroke up on the board. Logos looked at him and said, ‘Well done Metty.’ God just grinned, looked at the chalkboard, and gave Metatron a formal bow. ‘It seems you have bested me for once. But beware my wrath, dear Metatron.’ And Metatron smiled. Yes, indeed, Metatron’s Gambit had proved successful, and for that he was immensely happy and relieved. Most relieved indeed. THE END For more stories in the Chronicles of the Children of Destiny saga, free to read online, visit: http://noahidebooks.angelfire.com
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