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The Equinox Paradigm (short story set in Tuggeranong in the future)
Author: Daniel Thomas Andrew Daly
Date: Thu, 01 Apr 2010 00:45
Date: Thu, 01 Apr 2010 00:45
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The Equinox Paradigm By Daniel Thomas Andrew Daly http://noahidebooks.angelfire.com http://danielthomasandrewdaly.angelfire.com Š 2010-03-05 Chapter One Suddenly alive. 487 years stuck in limbo, Karnos, a deity of extreme perseverance to accomplish his sadistic objectives, had spent 487 years in limbo, banished there by Jaltar, a deity of Law and Order, serving the Universal Spirit of Justice. Karnos was pissed off, very fucking pissed off, and swore traditional vengeance on Jaltar. Jaltar knew it was coming, though, and had arranged for Karnos new human form to be limited to just that â humanity. And sitting there, in the darkness, he was suddenly alive, on a mountain overlooking a city, something which felt like Australia, in human form, and suddenly very thirsty. Karnos had staggered down the mountain, come to a river, and had drunk deeply, refreshing his soul and new body. And then he had lifted his hand to the skies and sworn vengeance upon Jaltar, and destruction of his assembly, the Jaltarians. He swam the river, came to a road, and gradually followed it up, coming to the city limits. He was naked, and as he came to a main road he was honked by numerous cards. He could eat plants, he knew that, but he wanted finer foods, and would need an income. He knew English, the tongue of Australia, so made his way gradually up a road, coming to an interesting looking building. It looked like a bus terminal. He entered, coming up to a receptionist, who looked embarrassed. âShouldnât you be wearing clothes,â she said. âI donât have any,â replied Karnos. âIs there a welfare centre nearby?â âOh, I see. Well, Centrelink is just around the corner. Look, I will take you there. You probably need help by the looks of it.â âThanks,â said Karnos. 5 minutes later, exiting the vehicle, the woman having given him a skivvy and some pants, they came into the Centrelink office. The lady had told him they were in Tuggeranong in Canberra, and the current year was 2562 CE. He had inquired into his religion and found that Tuggeranong had a Karnosian assembly in the suburb of Macarthur. She had attended once, also attending a number of new deity assemblies, as was her habit. He had also inquired about Jaltarism and found they had an assembly in the district of Belconnen. âGoodâ, he said to himself. It was always useful to know were your enemy was hiding. The lady who helped him told him her name was âRebecca Lyantâ and that should he ever need help she was available. He eyed her suspiciously, expecting perhaps a potential enemy, but thanked her thinking she was likely innocent and unsuspecting. He gave the centre a standard âI have lost my memoryâ explanation, and despite them putting his face through a face scanner to try and identify him, they had no luck, so granted him a new ID which he chose himself and put him on the standard living allowance, and granted him a Government Unit in the centre of Greenway. âPerfectâ he thought to himself. He would strike his enemy from there. That afternoon he was taken to his unit, which already had furniture, and was further taken by one of the Centrelink managers, following protocols, to the main Hyperdome complex to be given various clothing items, shoes and all the necessities for life. The manager showed him were all the shops were, gave him a debit card for his shopping needs, and explained that if he ran out of food the St Vincent de Paul Centre would always help him out. âWe are here to help, Marcus,â said the manager to Karnos in the new name he had chosen for himself. âWe are a thriving community now and Tuggeranong has reached 2 million souls just recently. You can have a great and prosperous life here, and we are a very caring community. I do hope you find what you are looking for. âYeh, well thanksâ, responded Marcus, finding it quite nice to have a kind word spoken, unlike the usual torments he had faced in his gladiatorial deity wars. Sitting in his apartment, looking out the window, there was a knock on the door. He opened it and âRebeccaâ stood there, holding a square box. âCan I come in, Marcus?â âUh, sure. Whatâs in the box?â âPizza. Youâll love it. Arnoldâs is ancient, and they make simply divine pizzaâs. Oh, and I brought a bottle of Coca Cola. I love the stuff.â He looked at the coke and swore to himself. Nearly 500 years and they were still making Coca Cola â some things never change. She put on a DVD she had brought, a music one of âBritney Spearsâ, who was still living after over 500 years, so healthy had the diets of society become and so lengthy the new life expectancies. He was surprised at that, but not too surprised. Perhaps he also had a long life here now as well. After the songs had played for an hour or so, and they had finished there pizza, she looked at him. âDo you want to fuck, then? I am randy and you are cute.â âSure,â he said. They went into the bedroom and she took off her clothes and got onto the bed on all fours. âDo me like a beast, Marcus. Give it to me you bad boy.â He stripped off, his manhood standing at attention, and proceeded to fuck her brains out. It was totally exhilarating. Having a cigarette after the action, she asked him a question. âSo what is the plan, dude? What are your goals.â âI have an enemy who vanquished me. He must pay.â âOh, so you do know who you are.â âUh, oh. Yeh. But I donât have a name here and I had no finances or anything. Iâm not ripping you off.â âOk. Iâll take you at your word. Well, do you want to fuck me a lot. I will stay with you if you do. I like to fuck men, and youâre hot. What do you say?â âFuck. Okay. Sounds good.â âIâll go and get my stuff. Be back in an hour or so.â âSeeya.â He watched her go, realized he was hitched already, but didnât mind. She was cute and would do as a girlfriend, but vengeance was on his mind. * * * * * Sex every night for 7 straight weeks and Marcus had forgotten his grudge. Instead he was learning about traditional Paganism and the âEquinox Paradigmâ. The religion Rebecca followed. And it was the âEquinox Paradigmâ which was to transform the life of a previously decadent of heart deity of the universe. Chapter Two The preacher continued. âFor it is in âBALANCEâ that we find harmony. It is the completion of humanity, the centrepoint, the fundamental axis and axiom of our lives. For the extremes of the solstices bring us to the passions of life, the heat and the cold, but in the balance of the centrepoint, in the balance of the middle, in the Equinox Paradigm, we find perfection of our hearts, minds and soul.â Marcus looked at the reaction to these words on Rebeccaâs face, and it summed it all up. She was totally hooked. Four hours later she was fucking him harder then ever, and then went down on him and swallowed all his creamy load. Fuck, she was randy, he thought to himself. If this was the âEquinox Paradigmâ let it keep on coming. * * * * * It was when the Jaltarian entered the assembly that Marcus felt stirred. This kid, whoever he was, was his enemy. He knew it instantly. The kid had a look about him, a spirit, which suggested condemnation of the âEquinoxianâsâ. And Marcus would not abide that. He came up to the kid, inquired into his name, found out that it was âJoelâ, and suggested to him that this place probably wasnât for him. Joel gave him a funny look and left, something which said it all. But Marcus didnât care â he knew a troublemaker when he saw one, and four days later when Joel returned to give the assembly members a âJaltarianâ flyer, Marcus knew what it had all been about. But he was over it, now. Heâd forgiven his enemy in his heart, as the way of the Equinox taught him to do so, and let go of his grudge. Joel was simply young. Young and naive, not understanding the fuller realities of life. He could speak to him, share his newly acquired wisdom but, in the end, thought better of it. You canât teach an old dog new tricks, a quiet voice whispered to his mind, and that was the end of the issue. Chapter Three Marcus had 17 children with Rebecca before she left off bearing. But they stayed together anyway and ended up in the Lanyon valley. The âEquinox Paradigmâ became central to his way of life, and every day he studied the nature based texts to learn more and more of how to be perfectly natural. It summed up his whole life and, late one night, his wife giving him an awesome blow job, he thanked the universal spirit that things, in the end, had turned out for the best. The End
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