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Chronicles of the Children of Destiny - 'Gabriel and Aquariel'
Author: Daniel Thomas Andrew Daly
Date: Fri, 09 Apr 2010 02:32
Date: Fri, 09 Apr 2010 02:32
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'Chronicles of the Children of Destiny' “Gabriel and Aquariel” by Daniel Thomas Andrew Daly http://noahidebooks.angelfire.com http://www.myspace.com/danielthomasandrewdaly http://davideddingsfanfiction.angelfire.com Chapter One Four weeks after the wedding of eternity, Gabriel was sitting by the Terravon. Nearby was Aquariel, throwing bread at the swans who were swimming around. She looked over at him, smiled and waved, and turned back to the swans. They were close at the moment – very close. The wedding between Michael and Elenniel had touched them, changing them. They were deeper now – deeper in their friendship – closer as brother and sister. And he found something, something in the deep of night, which spoke to his heart. Something of love and commitment, one that would endure, not just temporarily, but eternally. One that, through the hard times, and through the good times, would always march on, never forgetting the beauty of love and the beauty of the God which had birthed it. Aquariel had spoken in similar ways, and they had laughed together at the irony of thinking such similar thoughts. Daniel was close by, sitting with Ariel. At the moment they were an item, but nobody expected it to last forever, not even Daniel from what he had said personally to Gabriel. But for the moment he would enjoy his twin. Aquariel finished feeding the swans and came and sat next to him on the bench. She put her hand in his and leaned on his shoulder. ‘You’re sweet,’ she whispered to him. ‘I know,’ he responded with a subtle grin, whereupon Aquariel punched him lightly on the shoulder and said ‘You vain thing,’ and Gabriel laughed. It was a pleasant afternoon for the small group of 6 angels, very pleasant indeed. Cosadriel and Oshanel came and sat down next to Gabriel and Aquariel, Cosadriel a little wet from the swim he had just taken. ‘He was trying to be a hero,’ said Oshanel. He found this tree trunk crossing over much of the Terravon down stream and tried to jump from the end of it to the other side. He fell in, naturally.’ ‘Accidents happen,’ said Gabriel. ‘Hey it’s only water,’ responded Cosadriel. ‘Besides, I nearly made the distance, and it was a fair few cubits.’ ‘Still training for that long jump, are you?’ asked Aquariel. ‘Glory for Iceland,’ responded Cosadriel. ‘Besides, I know that bloody Cherubim has his limits. I’ll beat him eventually.’ ‘Daranok is naturally talented,’ said Gabriel. ‘He is an athlete by nature. Perhaps no matter how hard you work he will always come back at you and edge you out.’ ‘Maybe,’ said Cosadriel, but had not really conceded that. ‘I always thought Azrael was your biggest worry,’ said Aquariel. ‘Oh, believe me he still is,’ responded Oshanel. ‘But Saddy is competitive and tries to beat everyone if he can. It is just his ego, sis. Just his ego.’ ‘It is not my bloody ego, ok. I am just competitive by nature. It is how he made me, ok.’ ‘Probably,’ responded Gabriel. ‘But ego can be a big motivator in many ways. We often try to live up to outrageous claims we have made, no matter how foolish they might later be.’ ‘Very wise,’ said Oshanel. ‘I think Saddy does perhaps suffer from that.’ ‘Perhaps,’ responded Cosadriel. ‘Well, are we finished here,’ Oshanel asked Gabriel. ‘I guess,’ he responded. ‘I’ll let Daniel and Ariel know.’ The six of them, finished for the afternoon, made there way into the large car and they started off for Terraphon. Reflecting upon the afternoon Gabriel sighed to himself. It was a pleasant enough day in Eternity, a happy little diversion from everyday life. But the affairs of Terraphon beckoned tomorrow and council was coming up very shortly, a time of great hectic responsibility. ‘On with another day,’ he thought to himself. Chapter Two Aquariel looked at the picture of Michael and Gabriel. It was an old picture now, thousands of years in fact. He noticed how they had not really changed in appearance but Gabriel seemed, in some ways, less worried in this picture. Perhaps it was a time of less responsibility, lesser worries, lesser concerns. A happier time of youth. Suddenly she wanted to be with him, to comfort him. To let him know everything was alright, that all was good. That all was at peace. She ran to his office, opened the door, and saw him sitting at his desk, a frown on his face. Coming around he looked up and she put her arms around his shoulder, comforting him. ‘Is all well Gabriel,’ she asked. He sighed, put down his pen, and responded, ‘Oh, you know. Work. Frustrating as ever, and often a pain in the neck. But that is life, isn’t it. The responsibilities that God has given us to do.’ ‘But we don’t need to work all the time, brother. You have many delegates you can pass your responsibilities on to if you wish. Why don’t we go away for a while, just you and me. Somewhere up north, somewhere we can relax. Escape from things. Enjoy life.’ He looked at her, seriously considering her offer, when a little voice in his mind whispered to him, ‘It will be ok. Go on, spoil yourself.’ ‘You’re on Aqua. I’ll just finish up with this and we can go pack.’ She took his pen from his hand, saying, ‘Enough is enough Gabriel. We go now. You have had enough, I can tell. Time for a break.’ ‘If you insist.’ Gabriel looked at his desk as Aquariel pulled him along, a little worried, but then realized he had competent help. They were not stupid, after all, and could handle things for now. Time for a break – time for a holiday – time to let go of things for a while and simply be himself. Simply be Gabriel the Seraphim. * * * * * The cabin was all a log cabin really should be, Gabriel thought to himself, just grateful there was in fact running water and toilet facilities. After having looked it over, he had sat on the bed and watched as Aquariel swept the floor, giving it that feminine touch. After they had unpacked Aquariel asked him to go outside and chop some wood. Picking up the axe he realized to himself that it had been a hell of a long time since he had in fact chopped any wood and was a little worried he might hurt himself. But after he had split three or four of the logs, he was starting to get the hang of it. Aquariel came outside and watched him for a while, before making her way out into the forest, yelling she was going to collect mushrooms and whatever else she could find. He chopped wood for about an hour, building up perhaps more than they would need, but realizing they were there for a month and might need a lot. As he walked to the cabin he noticed out the back some other chopped wood and coming around to look at it properly he noticed there were literally tonnes of it – over a years supply easily. He smiled to himself, thought on the irony, but just put the wood on the pile anyway. Aquariel suddenly appeared, came over to him and also looked at the wood. ‘You haven’t done that much, have you?’ she asked incredulously. Gabriel thought quickly, ‘Oh. Oh, uh, yeh. Bloody hell it was hard work,’ he responded, wiping his brow. She eyed him suspiciously, but didn’t comment any further. They ate the mushrooms with wine and the bacon which was in the esky of food they had brought with them. ‘I will go into town tomorrow and do a proper food shop,’ said Aquariel. ‘Perhaps you could finally start that new novel you have been putting off for the last 10,000 years.’ Gabriel considered that and nodded. There was a computer in the flat and it was as good as time as ever to write a book. He had a few ideas for the original title, ‘The Final Encounter,’ but hadn’t completely finished the plot in his mind. But he could work on it now and see what came forth.’ They slept well that night, the worries of Terraphon disappearing in the Alpine winter air, and Gabriel was at peace. A gentle happy peace. Chapter Three ‘Interesting.’ She put the manuscript onto her knees, and smiled at him. But interesting was all she said. ‘Well do you like it? It took me all day that chapter practically.’ ‘Yes, it is good. You write well, naturally really. I am just concerned that it doesn’t seem much of a plot. It starts slowly and doesn’t really allude to anything major coming. I mean, what is it all about?’ ‘Oh, there is a plot alright. And starting slow is how this book is meant to be. But is the writing any good? The language I mean?’ ‘About the same as most fiction books I have read. There aren’t any grammatical problems and the dialogue is realistic. I mean you could probably publish the finished book if it was all like this and get a decent readership, but you will need some interesting ideas.’ ‘Then don’t worry about it. The end of chapter two should give you the hint.’ * * * * * The following day, having just finished the second chapter, Aquariel had a slightly different look on her face than yesterdays, but not yet any great sign of enjoyment. ‘What is that supposed to mean, at the end of the chapter. I don’t understand that. You don’t think that.’ ‘No, I don’t, not at all. But the character does, ok. You’ll see.’ ‘Ok. But, yeh, it was more of the same, but looks interesting now. I’ll read the next chapter.’ * * * * * Aquariel was starting to think her brother might just have a book which would catch people’s attention. Really catch their attention. It was the third chapter, now, and suddenly the book had really come alive with a plot twist she really had not seen coming. And now she was hooked. She wouldn’t call him brilliant, not yet. But now understanding the first two chapters, she started to see why it had gone slow. He was a smart thinker, her brother. A very smart thinker. Chapter Four “Too good. Really, Gab. Too good. Perhaps the best I have ever read, and I have read too many.” “I guess it was worth the effort, then.” “You see, a holiday has done you the world. Refreshed you. Rejuvenated you, and I think you really did need it.” “Do you think I should release it on the web, now? Just put it up on my website?” “Don’t you want the royalties? It will make good money, you know.” “Oh, I will have it published in paperback as well. But I will give it for free first on the web and see what readership it gets. It might even sell more in the end because of it.” “Not a bad idea,’ responded Aquariel. The last few days of that month were a pleasant time of rest and recreation for Gabriel and Aquariel and Gabriel kissed his sister telling her he loved her as they arrived home in Terraphon. It had really been a soul restoring vacation and he was in a very good mood because of it. Chapter Five “Number one. Not bad, Gab. Not bad.” Gabriel smiled at Aquariel. The news reader had just made the announcement of that weeks best selling novels and Gabriel had come in at number one with ‘The Final Encounter’. He had only released a few books previously, and well before such charts had become a reality, but gaining a number one had really made him pleased. He leaned over, kissed his sister, and said ‘I couldn’t have done it without you, Aquariel. I couldn’t have done it without you.’ ‘I know,’ she responded, and Gabriel laughed. THE END
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