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Article #5985Re: bakeries
From: lucy
Date: Tue, 02 Mar 2004 18:44
Date: Tue, 02 Mar 2004 18:44
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Ouch! I will now hang my head in shame.. :) "Brian Baresch" <brian_news2@peacenik.removethisstuff.net> wrote in message news:aof8409tk7509q1ud1n9s4e0aascv9e5mr@4ax.com... > On Mon, 01 Mar 2004 20:13:55 GMT, "lucy" > wrote: > > >testing > > Capitalization: F > Punctuation: F > Brevity: A > Plot: D- > While the post lacks originality, and is extremely weak in plot, > character development and motivation, it does follow the tradition > of terse dialogue inspired by Hemingway and others, as well as > utilizing the style of e.e. cummings. The editors would suggest that > future sequels and other submissions include more background and > gradually introduce additional characters into the story as it > unfolds. We look forward to seeing new and interesting manuscripts > from this up-and-coming author. > > (I just saw this somewhere else and couldn't resist. Sorry.) > > -- > Brian P. Baresch > Fort Worth, Texas, USA > Professional editing and proofreading > > If you're going through hell, keep going. --Winston Churchill
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