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Article #1408Re: Anyone comment on Storyshaper? [actually, Storyspace]
From: Tom Maddox
Date: Wed, 06 Jan 1993 19:07
Date: Wed, 06 Jan 1993 19:07
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Here is an excerpt from a column of mine published in _Locus_ magazine, December, 1992. It was the second of two columns on hypertext. ***** [. . .] And with regard to Storyspace itself-- which I consider an ongoing laboratory environment for hypertext--[Mark Bernstein] says it is like "a new kind of paint." In order to understand why this is so, we have to consider the general nature of what is in some ways the most serious and complex mode of hypertext artifact: the extended prose narrative. The print text has a beginning and end, easy to locate and understand. We start here, we end there. Robert Coover, in an excellent article about hypertext in The New York Times Book Review (June 21, 1992) remarks: "Much of the novel's alleged power is embedded in the *line* [my emphasis], that compulsory author-directed movement from the beginning of a sentence to its period, from the top of the page to the bottom, from the first page to the last." Thus, "Have you read it?" has a simple meaning: have you traversed the "line"? Some print texts inflict a kind of hyper- structure on us. Coover goes on to say, "[T]here have been countless strategies to counter the line's power, from marginalia and footnotes to the creative innovations of novelists like Laurence Sterne, James Joyce, Raymond Queneau, Julio Cortzar, Italo Calvino and Milorad Pavic." Such texts may pose riddles or repetitions that drive us to hunt through what we've already read; they may assume peculiar non-linear forms (dictionaries or encyclopedias, for example); they may contradict themselves or appear to do so; they may even connect their ends to their beginnings in an attempt to defy linear form. Finnegans Wake, Dhalgren, and Gravity's Rainbow, to give three notable examples, do such things. However, the physical facts remain: there is the book, and if I turn its pages from beginning to end, reading each in its turn, I say, "I've read that; I've finished it"--never mind what I do or do not understand about what I've read. However, the hypertext artifact won't allow us such delusions. "Have you read [Michael Joyce's] Afternoon?" Bernstein asked during one of our conversations, and I just laughed. Hypertext has no necessary beginning and end, hence no unitary completeness: it will not allow us to finish--we are reading it, or we have stopped reading it; we have never read it. We have never completed "the line" because we cannot: as Coover says, "[T]rue freedom from the tyranny of the line is perceived as only really possible now at last with the advent of hypertext, written and read on the computer, where the line does not exist unless one invents and implants it in the text." Storyspace, written for the Macintosh, allows the writer to invent an extraordinary number of lines and to connect them in weird and multifarious ways. One word or phrase or graphical element can lead to any number of others; one "space"--a kind of window in the text that is to Storyspace what the paragraph is to print text--can lead to any number of others. The reader's choices are both enabled and circumscribed as the author chooses: I might allow only one connection between spaces, I might force you to choose among many; I might not allow you to see certain spaces until you have read others (this is done through a cute piece of technique called a "guard field" that allows access to a given space only when specified criteria have been met). I can present you a two-dimensional map of all spaces and allow you to choose among them at your whim. ***** [end of excerpt] Unlike a previous poster on this topic, I haven't been willing to make a commitment to Storyspace as a vehicle for writing a novel. I find it just a little too unstable; in particular, its printing capabilities can result in unexpected results, including crashes. In fact, I regard it as a medium for creating true hypertext, meant to be read on a computer, and I entertain in a desultory way the idea of writing for that medium some day. Now that I think of it, I am not satisfied with *any* writing software for the Mac. Word drives me nuts (interface, clumsiness, bugs), Nisus has odd vulnerabilities (memory-based editing, unexpected formatting changes, no major update in a few years), and Word Perfect, which is what I am using on a novel ms. right now, can be slow and has a weird problem with screen rewrites using some fonts. -- Tom Maddox tmaddox@netcom.com "That's a bird bone chair, Bob. I don't know if I should sit there." Tom Waits
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