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Article #843Re: TECHNICAL: online/on-line
From: Brent Jones
Date: Thu, 05 Nov 1992 13:34
Date: Thu, 05 Nov 1992 13:34
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In article <k446553@pro-amber.cts.com> jeff@pro-amber.cts.com (Jeff Jungblut) writes: >In <17136@mindlink.bc.ca> >Linda_Richards@mindlink.bc.ca (Linda Richards) writes: > >>> Jeff Jungblut writes: >>> >>> Msg-ID: <k213168@pro-amber.cts.com> >>> Posted: Mon, 2 Nov 92 03:14:39 P >>> >>> Org. : ProLine [pro-amber] -- Spring Valley, Ca >>> >>> The Apple Publications Style Guide: >>> >>> on-line (adj.), on line (pred. adj., adv.) Note hyphenation of adjective. >>> >>> --- >>> In my own writing, I usually use on-line except when referring to online >>> help, in which case I spell it as one word. >> >> >>Yes, but what does it get edited to? > >Considering I'm also usually the editor, it stays as I wrote it. (In the >case of online vs on-line vs on line, at least.) I'm not sure what you mean here. You say you usually use "on-line" unless you are referring to "online help." Do you mean that you would write "on-line information" and "on-line access" but would write "online help"? As all of these strings have essentially the same grammatical structure, I'm not sure how you would justify the inconsistent usage. Using "on-line" after the modified word in the sentence would also fly in the face of convention--most sources would recommend "on line." You would hyphenate the compound modifier if the reader is likely to momentarily read the first part of the compound, "on," as an adjective, which I don't think is true in this particular case. A sample sentence would be, "The help screens are on line." Just curious. Conventions are conventions, and not altars to worship at (at which to worship? :-)), but they should probably be logical and internally consistent. This is especially true in technical documentation. -- Brent Jones, Lead Technical Editor, U S WEST Information Technologies U S WEST sez "Nuh uh, his opinion, not ours." bjones@denitqm.uswest.com "In the Kingdom of Boredom, I wear the Royal Sweatpants." --M. Leyner
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Newsgroups: misc.writing Path: arc1-ca.pugleaf.net!sparky!uunet!charon.amdahl.com!pacbell.com!decwrl!concert!gatech!purdue!yuma!csn!cherokee!da_vinci!lookout.it.uswc.uswest.com!bjones From: bjones@lookout.it.uswc.uswest.com (Brent Jones) Subject: Re: TECHNICAL: online/on-line Message-ID: <Bx8wCp.2ov@da_vinci.it.uswc.uswest.com> Sender: news@da_vinci.it.uswc.uswest.com (IT Netnews) Nntp-Posting-Host: lookout Organization: U S WEST Information Technologies References: <17136@mindlink.bc.ca> <k446553@pro-amber.cts.com> Date: Thu, 5 Nov 1992 13:34:00 GMT Lines: 47