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Article #881kill your darlings
From: Robert Chao
Date: Mon, 09 Nov 1992 00:07
Date: Mon, 09 Nov 1992 00:07
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a common screenplay saying is "kill your darlings," which means, eliminate anything in your script that is not essential to the plot. Aren't there some great films that have scenes that are not essential? What do you think of these: In Star Wars, there is a scene where Luke and Leia are separated from Han and Chewie, so that Luke swings over the bridge and Han runs around shooting. The thing is, afterwards, aren't they right back to where they started? Don't these scenes not make the story progress? In the Godfather, what about the horse's head scene? Does that move the story forward? or is it necessary to develop characters? did you know that a great scene was cut from Annie Hall because it wasn't essential? it was Woody making friends with some guys in jail. -- Robert Chao Oakland, California
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Newsgroups: misc.writing Path: arc1-ca.pugleaf.net!sparky!uunet!well!rchao From: rchao@well.sf.ca.us (Robert Chao) Subject: kill your darlings Message-ID: <BxF9p5.E2v@well.sf.ca.us> Sender: news@well.sf.ca.us Organization: Whole Earth 'Lectronic Link Date: Mon, 9 Nov 1992 00:07:53 GMT Lines: 18