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Jon Campbell raises a point that I really sympathize with. If you find
yourself, as the resident God of your story, creating really evil characters,
you may not be happy with your story or yourself.

I had a similar experience as recently as Chapter 2 of Redmagic, a week or so
ago, when I found myself portraying the actions and thoughts of a wizard
whose idea of right behavior is to cut someone's heart out as proper
gratitude for a success. It gave me the creeps, but it was essential to the
story that he be such a person.

Maybe this won't work for Jon or others, but I find I like my villains and
monsters. They're doing the best they can, and they think they're right to
behave as they do. I sympathize with them...but I also hope that their
"niceness" will enhance their creepiness. A (literally) heart-rending priest
is also affectionate to his junior priest and the soldiers who help him
conquer other tribes. He really loves them in a gentle, parental sense. And
that makes him and his culture more interesting to me, because a
one-dimensional evil is no evil at all. It's when your likable next-door
neighbor becomes a serial killer that you need to examine what made him do
it...and what makes him like you.

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Crawford Kilian   Communications Department   Capilano College
North Vancouver BC Canada V7J 3H5
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