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Article #2803Nerets (fiction)
From: Fabrizio J. Bonsignore
Date: Thu, 07 Oct 2004 13:58
Date: Thu, 07 Oct 2004 13:58
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`Do you think he has the acumen?` `I do` Dan Gam was barely surviving. State help would be cut next month and his meager wage as a salesman was barely adequate to cover hotel and food, not even transport. Then he went on TV. Not that he wanted it, it was not even in his own country, but he knew he had been on TV. All his acquaintances were appalled, not believing it. And he could hear them. Whether it was telepathy, Big Brother or paid agitators, he knew something was wrong. Weird, how in the computer appeared his computer`s name and old address... People around Dan started commenting his life. They knew too. But for each A there was a Z. Then one night he heard it. Nerets. What was Nerets? He didn`t know, but it was important. At first he wasn`t aware but somehow it related to some repeated phrases that would pop out everywhere. Wherever he was there was a raucus (from job to hotel, where else?), confusing everything, though clearly he needed to know about Nerets. He had to be there, or with them... Little by little a smudged picture emerged: Nerets had to do with immortality, gods, stars and... the future. He would maintain a log with his impressions and the words and phrases he was picking up. Too fantastic it seemed and yet... a life of skepticism was being cracked by the undeniable corroborations he was getting. But he had enemies and his enemies were after him and sent people after him, confusing him, threatening. Dan had friends and his friends wanted to conduct him to Nerets, to save him from his enemies, but he didn`t know them, either the friends or the foes, only the rumors that were reaching him from everywhere at the same time. Somehow he was being prosecuted and a battle was being fought to define his future. The problem was that his enemies, once very mundane, where using him to reach the secret of Nerets, one by one, while he was lost trying to understand. A group was being formed and his foes, all criminals, were desperate to keep him outside. They were going to the future, they were going to get all dreams realized, but somehow he had the key to it and part of that key was his computer log. By writing to it the future would change, the future was in the making and Dan would alternatively win and defeat his enemies according to the information he was supplying and the deductions he was arriving at. Unfortunately he couldn`t distinguish friends from foes. One mistake would ruin his life, another one would give him victory. Many strange encounters came and go, unable to decide whether to join or not, whether it was help or a trap. But his enemies knew well and one by one reached the secret and the rewards. The Nerets were time travelers and his Nemesis had arrived first. He went and came, though it was in his hand whether to grant immortality or not, wisdom or savagery. The only fact at the moment is that his great foe did go, and having the key to time was fighting him behind and beyond. Some battles Dan won, others he lost, lots of people were involved, myths and legends were created and destroyed, yet one step at a time the Foe was building his revenge. Dan Gam decided to keep the secret of immortality from Nerets and let them fend by themselves. The rest of his foes reached the group, not without destroying his friends and gurus on the way there, and once back they would only tell: `You don`t know what he did to you!` Dan was left alone, the whole world against him. In the end he kept his secrets, his aces. All his friends were defeated, destroyed, bribed or otherwise dissapeared from his life. His foes achieved a victory. The group left and came back, those who remain, for he was the fulcrum and, without him, Utopia turned into Hell and evil prevailed... Rumors, legends, myths, stories, all mixed and copulated and were known by the whole world, mass confusion veiling the nature of the battle, while Dan Gam kept fighting to understand what was Nerets and have truth and goodness prevail. The future was in the making, he knew, he only needed to convince a few people that he hold the aces, the keys to the future he negated the Nerets, convinved that the door to Nerets was somewhere, in somebody`s hands and he would finally be granted the opportunity to go and confront his enemies, and win. Dan Gam knew what the Foe had done to him. Still fighting, Dan would look in the mirror and see that his face had turned, without ever changing, into the very face of Evil... Lucifer. ghamac.org/miniface.jpg (part of the story)
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