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Started by K.S.Hodges
Fri, 11 Jul 1997 00:00
rant - scones /kim h
Author: K.S.Hodges
Date: Fri, 11 Jul 1997 00:00
Date: Fri, 11 Jul 1997 00:00
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scones
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once again
an evening walk
hoping for a cool breeze
after 3 days
still no scones
at Starbucks.
west of the mountains
they have lots, i say,
all kinds, from Washington
to California.
the clerk smiles,
we haven't got any
for a while, he says.
it's like this is
a deadspot, i say,
you should visit
a Starbucks over there.
he continues to smile.
this is the desert.
they don't have to try.
Kim Hodges
7/10/97
Kennewick, WA
Re: rant - scones /kim h
Author: matt robinson
Date: Fri, 11 Jul 1997 00:00
Date: Fri, 11 Jul 1997 00:00
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K.S.Hodges wrote: > > scones > ---------------------------- > > once again > an evening walk > hoping for a cool breeze > after 3 days > still no scones > at Starbucks. > west of the mountains > they have lots, i say, > all kinds, from Washington > to California. > the clerk smiles, > we haven't got any > for a while, he says. > it's like this is > a deadspot, i say, > you should visit > a Starbucks over there. > he continues to smile. > this is the desert. > they don't have to try. > > Kim Hodges > 7/10/97 > Kennewick, WA this is simple and very good... i like the form that it takes more than anything else- it flows, just like the conversation/exchange in question... the topic is rathr kool as well, it dwells in the hum drum of ordinary existence.... thanx. matt robinson matt@istar.ca
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