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Started by MegaZone23
Tue, 03 Nov 1992 03:32
Love, the rewrite - C&C welcome
Author: MegaZone23
Date: Tue, 03 Nov 1992 03:32
Date: Tue, 03 Nov 1992 03:32
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Well, thanks for the reviews and comments and criticisms on the first posting, I've rewritten it and this is take two... Love I love the way your eyes reflect the light How your hair frames your lovely face The twist in your smile Like you know a secret about me Walking together in the warm rains Watching the clouds drift by Listening to the sounds of the city As we lie upon the hill I love to hold you through the night Reveling in your warmth Rarely speaking Simply loving The gentle curve of your neck Silken skin Gentle touch Soft kiss I love to hear your voice Revealing our secrets Sharing thoughts Hopes and fears We share a bond beyond physical A bond of ideas and trust Two souls connected By shared desire I love you Though we've never met I know that someday We will meet megazone, They don't need me here and I know you're there, 11/2/92
Re: Love, the rewrite - C&C welcome
Author: Thomas Langenback
Date: Wed, 04 Nov 1992 02:35
Date: Wed, 04 Nov 1992 02:35
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megazone@banzai.WPI.EDU (MegaZone23) writes: > Love > [LOTS of stuff deleted] > > I love you > Though we've never met > I know that someday > We will meet I've never really been much on poetry, but I must say that I rather enjoyed reading this. (Trust me...coming from me, that's a COMPLIMENT! <G>) -- "Spock/Data '92 -- The Logical Choice" Campaign Manager tom@freddyk.uucp freddyk!tom@engr.uark.edu ...engr.uark.edu!freddyk!tom
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