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Started by DL20
Tue, 18 Aug 1992 21:44
Speaking in a vacuum
Author: DL20
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 21:44
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 21:44
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Have you ever tried to write a story in which there is only one
character, all by herself? I've been working on such a story and am
finding it more difficult than I have ever imagined to give the story
any grip. Stories are interesting because of some central conflict,
and it's bugger-all difficult to have a conflict with only one
character (unless she's schizo or something, and this one isn't).
Has anyone out there ever written or read a story in which there
is only one character at all? Was the story a success? I'm curious to
know if I'm the only one who has trouble doing this.
Re: Speaking in a vacuum
Author: Ratboy
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 22:27
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 22:27
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>Have you ever tried to write a story in which there is only one >character, all by herself? I've been working on such a story and am >finding it more difficult than I have ever imagined to give the story >any grip. Stories are interesting because of some central conflict, >and it's bugger-all difficult to have a conflict with only one >character (unless she's schizo or something, and this one isn't). > Has anyone out there ever written or read a story in which there >is only one character at all? Was the story a success? I'm curious to >know if I'm the only one who has trouble doing this. I find that my stories suffer from lack of characters. Many stories I am working on only have a few characters. Never had one with onbly one though, but most have limited outside contact as a factor in the story. All the conflict comes from within the character...personal realizations, etc... and Man/Woman vs. Nature...or versus his/her circumstances. Ratboy
Re: Speaking in a vacuum
Author: Sho Kuwamoto
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 22:55
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 22:55
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In article <18AUG92.18078012.0013@lafibm.lafayette.edu> DL20@lafibm.lafayette.edu (DL20) writes: >Have you ever tried to write a story in which there is only one >character, all by herself? I've been working on such a story and am >finding it more difficult than I have ever imagined to give the story >any grip. [...] > Has anyone out there ever written or read a story in which there >is only one character at all? Hope you're not planning on making a novel out of it... Is it told in the first person? When you say there are no other characters, do you mean that (1) no other characters appear in the scenes, or that (2) no other characters are mentioned, period. 1) I grabbed the rock and thought of Marta. 2) I grabbed the rock. I remember reading several short stories of type (1) (chances are good that you'll find one in either _T Zero_ by Calvino or _Ficciones_ by Borges). Can't recall if I've ever read one of type (2). You might also find inspiration from _Jealousy_ by Robbe-Grillet, although it doesn't exactly fit your criterion. -Sho
Re: Speaking in a vacuum
Author: selfish meme
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 23:27
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 23:27
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>Have you ever tried to write a story in which there is only one >character, all by herself? I've been working on such a story and am >finding it more difficult than I have ever imagined to give the story >any grip. Stories are interesting because of some central conflict, >and it's bugger-all difficult to have a conflict with only one >character (unless she's schizo or something, and this one isn't). > Has anyone out there ever written or read a story in which there >is only one character at all? Was the story a success? I'm curious to >know if I'm the only one who has trouble doing this. This is a hard problem. Most of what we find interesting in a story is a character's interactions with others. You might try to make the character's environment into a second character, or maybe personify some aspect of the character that would create an internal conflict. This sort of thing can be accomplished without the character being "schizo", but you should keep in mind that fiction very often skews characters/viewpoints in the direction of schizophrenia, because in general, normal people do not ususally make the connections that characters do in a story. Stories (at least those that attempt to be "literary") are generally about extraordinary experience, as opposed to the mundane. Good luck! Robert.
Re: Speaking in a vacuum
Author: Larry Westdahl
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 23:39
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 1992 23:39
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In article <18AUG92.18078012.0013@lafibm.lafayette.edu> DL20@lafibm.lafayette.edu (DL20) writes: >Have you ever tried to write a story in which there is only one >character, all by herself? I've been working on such a story and am >finding it more difficult than I have ever imagined to give the story >any grip. Stories are interesting because of some central conflict, >and it's bugger-all difficult to have a conflict with only one >character (unless she's schizo or something, and this one isn't). > Has anyone out there ever written or read a story in which there >is only one character at all? Was the story a success? I'm curious to >know if I'm the only one who has trouble doing this. Writing stories with one character is not easy, but it can be done. What you have to remember with these stories is that the conflict does not have to come from another character. Your protagonist could be up against nature, love, alcohol. . . The challenge is drawing this conflict as the second "character." I don't know what your story is about, so I can't get specific, but if you think about it in these terms, it might make it a little easier. Most single character stories are, by their nature, a little unusual, and that's why you don't see a lot of them. They're also hard to write. That's why I haven't tried, but I commend you for giving it a shot. Good question. - Lawrence -- __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ **larryw@lclark.edu** |STEVIE for presidend | "In human relations Writer, Musician, |CHRISTINE for VP | kindness and lies are Laker fan, Blazerhater.|LINDSEY for Sec. o' State| worth a thousand truths."
Re: Speaking in a vacuum
Author: eperkio
Date: Sun, 23 Aug 1992 14:43
Date: Sun, 23 Aug 1992 14:43
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In article <18AUG92.18078012.0013@lafibm.lafayette.edu>, DL20@lafibm.lafayette.edu (DL20) writes: > [...] > Has anyone out there ever written or read a story in which there > is only one character at all? Was the story a success? I'm curious to > know if I'm the only one who has trouble doing this. I once wrote a story of a terraformer machine returning to Earth after seeding a distant solar-system, only to find it empty with all mammals wiped out by a virus. The story was of its development from an automaton into a sentient being, and finally of its decision to correct a perceived wrongess; With a childlike persistency, it started to rebuild Earth, seek a way to make animals recreated from DNA-libraries immune, and ultimately to resurrect the race that had created it. Whereas some friends of mine claimed they liked the story, I found it too simple and straightforward, and put it back to the dim recesses of my hard disk to wait for extensive rewriting in order to concentrate on the developing personality with more detail. I liked the basic idea, but in its present form, it's in my opinion one of the worst pieces I've ever written. (Some consolation, hm? :)) Of stories by other people, 'Judgement Day' by L. Sprague de Camp pops into mind. It tells of the bitter reminescences of a scientist wondering whether or not publish results that might lead to an untimely end of the world. Other characters are present, but if I recall correctly, only as memories. _I_ liked the story. Good luck with your endeavor. -- Esa Perki| "I should honor you? Why?" eperkio@cc.helsinki.fi - Prometheus to Zeus according to Goethe IRCer Shade
Re: Speaking in a vacuum
Author: Ratboy
Date: Mon, 24 Aug 1992 01:22
Date: Mon, 24 Aug 1992 01:22
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>I once wrote a story of a terraformer machine returning to Earth after
>seeding a distant solar-system, only to find it empty with all mammals
>wiped out by a virus. The story was of its development from an automaton
>into a sentient being, and finally of its decision to correct a perceived
>wrongess; With a childlike persistency, it started to rebuild Earth, seek
>a way to make animals recreated from DNA-libraries immune, and ultimately
>to resurrect the race that had created it.
>
>Whereas some friends of mine claimed they liked the story, I found it too
>simple and straightforward, and put it back to the dim recesses of my
>hard disk to wait for extensive rewriting in order to concentrate on
>the developing personality with more detail. I liked the basic idea, but
>in its present form, it's in my opinion one of the worst pieces I've ever
>written. (Some consolation, hm? :))
>
Sounds fascinating. I would love to read it. Original. Gonna post it when done?
Ratboy the One-Who-Needs-To-Quit-Reading-Alt.Prose-and-Write-So-He-Can-Post-
Another-Story-Here
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