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Article #925Re: Critique Wanted II
From: Chokdee Robert
Date: Thu, 12 Nov 1992 05:24
Date: Thu, 12 Nov 1992 05:24
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Dear Leslie, I loved the poem, but that last line caught me kind of funny too. I can't seem to find the surrealistic connection between "your sky" and "your eyes." The imagery was simply breathtaking. But the last line seem to incorporate an image of E.E. Cummings' "Since Feeling Is First." But that's just my personal opinion. I have been a poet for a number of years now, and when I was published once, I had a person basically put me on trial. This person [who will remain nameless, so that I may kill them in the future] condemned me like a witch on trial in Salem for not explaining my works. She convicted me for my art and her confusion. So listen to your soul, C. Robert Rutirasiri at Boston University. p.s. wonderful journey in that poem. Thanks. p.p.s. email me back if you like at crutiras@acs.bu.edu
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