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Re: Critique Wanted II

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From: Chokdee Robert
Date: Thu, 12 Nov 1992 05:24
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Dear Leslie,

I loved the poem, but that last line caught me kind of funny too.  I can't
seem to find the surrealistic connection between "your sky" and "your eyes."
The imagery was simply breathtaking.  But the last line seem to incorporate
an image of E.E. Cummings' "Since Feeling Is First."

But that's just my personal opinion.  I have been a poet for a number of 
years now, and when I was published once, I had a person basically put
me on trial.  This person [who will remain nameless, so that I may kill
them in the future] condemned me like a witch on trial in Salem for not
explaining my works.  She convicted me for my art and her confusion.

So listen to your soul,

C. Robert Rutirasiri at Boston University.

p.s. wonderful journey in that poem.  Thanks.
p.p.s. email me back if you like at crutiras@acs.bu.edu
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