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Article #2719Re: Nerets (fiction)
From: Fabrizio J. Bonsignore
Date: Thu, 28 Oct 2004 13:56
Date: Thu, 28 Oct 2004 13:56
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`Do you think he has the acumen?` `I do` > Dan Gam was barely surviving. State help would be cut next month and > his meager wage as a salesman was barely adequate to cover hotel and > food, not even transport. Then he went on TV. > > Not that he wanted it, it was not even in his own country, but he knew > he had been on TV. All his acquaintances were appalled, not believing > it. And he could hear them. Whether it was telepathy, Big Brother or > paid agitators, he knew something was wrong. Weird, how in the > computer appeared his computer`s name and old address... > > People around Dan started commenting his life. They knew too. But for > each A there was a Z. Then one night he heard it. Nerets. > > What was Nerets? He didn`t know, but it was important. At first he > wasn`t aware but somehow it related to some repeated phrases that > would pop out everywhere. Wherever he was there was a raucus (from job > to hotel, where else?), confusing everything, though clearly he needed > to know about Nerets. He had to be there, or with them... > > Little by little a smudged picture emerged: Nerets had to do with > immortality, gods, stars and... the future. He would maintain a log > with his impressions and the words and phrases he was picking up. Too > fantastic it seemed and yet... a life of skepticism was being cracked > by the undeniable corroborations he was getting. But he had enemies > and his enemies were after him and sent people after him, confusing > him, threatening. Dan had friends and his friends wanted to conduct > him to Nerets, to save him from his enemies, but he didn`t know them, > either the friends or the foes, only the rumors that were reaching him > from everywhere at the same time. Somehow he was being prosecuted and > a battle was being fought to define his future. > > The problem was that his enemies, once very mundane, where using him > to reach the secret of Nerets, one by one, while he was lost trying to > understand. A group was being formed and his foes, all criminals, were > desperate to keep him outside. They were going to the future, they > were going to get all dreams realized, but somehow he had the key to > it and part of that key was his computer log. By writing to it the > future would change, the future was in the making and Dan would > alternatively win and defeat his enemies according to the information > he was supplying and the deductions he was arriving at. > > Unfortunately he couldn`t distinguish friends from foes. One mistake > would ruin his life, another one would give him victory. Many strange > encounters came and go, unable to decide whether to join or not, > whether it was help or a trap. But his enemies knew well and one by > one reached the secret and the rewards. > > The Nerets were time travelers and his Nemesis had arrived first. He > went and came, though it was in his hand whether to grant immortality > or not, wisdom or savagery. The only fact at the moment is that his > great foe did go, and having the key to time was fighting him behind > and beyond. Some battles Dan won, others he lost, lots of people were > involved, myths and legends were created and destroyed, yet one step > at a time the Foe was building his revenge. > > Dan Gam decided to keep the secret of immortality from Nerets and let > them fend by themselves. The rest of his foes reached the group, not > without destroying his friends and gurus on the way there, and once > back they would only tell: `You don`t know what he did to you!` Dan > was left alone, the whole world against him. > > In the end he kept his secrets, his aces. All his friends were > defeated, destroyed, bribed or otherwise dissapeared from his life. > His foes achieved a victory. The group left and came back, those who > remain, for he was the fulcrum and, without him, Utopia turned into > Hell and evil prevailed... > > Rumors, legends, myths, stories, all mixed and copulated and were > known by the whole world, mass confusion veiling the nature of the > battle, while Dan Gam kept fighting to understand what was Nerets and > have truth and goodness prevail. The future was in the making, he > knew, he only needed to convince a few people that he hold the aces, > the keys to the future he negated the Nerets, convinved that the door > to Nerets was somewhere, in somebody`s hands and he would finally be > granted the opportunity to go and confront his enemies, and win. > > Dan Gam knew what the Foe had done to him. Still fighting, Dan would > look in the mirror and see that his face had turned, without ever > changing, into the very face of Evil... A Lucifer. ghamac.org/miniface.jpg (part of the story) ghamac.org/documenti/rondop.mid ghamac.org/guitar/isabelsdeath.mp3 Danilo J Bonsignore Search under Fabrizio J Bonsignore, sort by date
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